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MarioNintendo

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PostSubject: I wrote a poem in French   May 3rd 2011, 11:57 pm

Je suis celui qui suit Satan,
Le jour noirci déjà m'attend.

Je suis celui qui fuit le temps,
Le jour fleuri déjà s'étend.



If you took French classes at some point in your life, now is the time to prove what you've got. Smile And then let's critical think on the matter
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PostSubject: Re: I wrote a poem in French   May 4th 2011, 9:26 am

(Never mind, found out "celui qui" actually means "he whom")

Apart from that, sounds like a generic poem from a goth on a happy day.
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PostSubject: Re: I wrote a poem in French   May 7th 2011, 10:12 am

I believe you missed the intentional ambiguities between the verb "être" and "suivre", which, conjugated in present tense with "je", look exactly the same.

But hey, it does look goth! I was mostly going for sonorities when writing this. "s" sounds.
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